I'ved rasied children with out the pains of child birth

this was deep and emotional this particular line made me think back to people i knew like this. i went through sort of the same thing but i am male and it wasn't the same burden. i love the simplicty of the words that belie the true complexity of the matter.

No hop scotch No jump rope, not for me nope
No hide go seek no playing house

Because there were no games in my house

Far to much to do in my house

i liked this, everyone else be damned grrrrr. just because you used house more than once means nothing. if you say it a little quicker than the original rhyme scheme.

like thisV

no hide go seek in my HOUSE, no games in my HOUSE, far much to do in my HOUSE

that is ill she's trying to emphasize the house and the anger she has for it. the way you wrote it kinda brought the emotion out in it. you can't write poetry, hell, even lyrics by a blueprint, you pulled this off fine.