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yo, DC ama start wit u first... what are u spittin? one liners??? anybody can spit one liners... but thats more of the way it looks then sounds... 2nd i aight gonna quote nothin cuz im lazy but to me ur punches were kinda lazy too didnt put nothin behind them... 3rd ur syllable count was kinda off in ur multi's made it all stop and go, tight that u threw those out there but just get them perfected and shit..... All in all U had some punches towards the end that were kinda nice so i know u can do better shit then this...
aiight this is herbals section... i like the use of vocabulary, thats something i didnt see wit DC... that neo neal thing was kinda gay and shit, but we all know what u meant, but get shit straight next time.... as wit DC ur shit did not flow most of the time, cuz u have a long ass line followed by like three werds and shit... that not good.... u had some repitition which was good id quote but lazyness comes in to play....
alright here it go...
flow - herbal got this cuz his shit wasnt as bad as DC
punches - DC gets it cuz had more but no ones really hit
wordplay - Herbal got this for the simple fact that it was better
Usage of Skillz (multis, alliteration, etc...) Herbal, he used repitition which is good, DC had multis but didnt do it how he should...
VOTE- ME CUZ SMOKE BOTH YA ASSES,
REAL VOTE- Herbal
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HK The Great
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