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View Poll Results: Who got merked? | |||
Dark cursiv | 5 | 71.43% | |
HERBAL | 2 | 28.57% | |
Voters: 7. You may not vote on this poll |
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09-30-03, 07:02 AM | #1 | |
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HERBAL v.s. DARK CURSIV
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ait well im tired so u can drop ure shit right now or tomaro but ama go to sleep u drop first then ill hit it up
10-20 lines no sorry votin bring it dog merk me if u can |
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09-30-03, 07:38 AM | #2 | |
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Alright you wack twat, let battle commence: Fuck, how can an MC be called Herbal? Thta's the wackest name I've heard in my life.........................Check:
HERBAL, this guy ain't got no game, he's style is plain and lame/ Claims to be a live wire, hard man but this faggot's been tamed/ This wack artist Can’t buss a rhyme, off beat or on time/ Claims he gonna merk me but this cat can’t even kill time/ Disconnect ya spine, about 20 degrees to the left, take ya last breath/ you'll reach ya death,leave a bloody mess of ya chest underneath ya vest/ Leavin' ya depressed, breathless, this faggots been verbally murdered/ Wack mc's, "Herbal Gerbil" beatin me it's unheared- a- (unheared of)/ Cos I'm a soldier, I've told ya, burn you up like solder (soldering iron, melting metal/ I'm colder so I'll murder you, you scared but I'm way much bolder/ Battle, rappin battle was the combat of the lyrical elite/ But your sweet, sweet meanin gay and you definatly ain't street/ Representin' cali?, I'll smoke you (shoot ya) like I'm blazin cali bud/ Your punchlines'll miss like a strike from an Iraqi skud (all got shot down in gulf war)/ Cos Dark cursiv leaves herbsies'(herbs) in herses, lookin at the roof of churches/ your dead son, can't stand to my verses, dangerous hexes like curses/ Cos I'm ill and I've got skill,reppin Drastik Measurez to the fullest/ My punchlines scar and kill, but if not you can't dodge bullets/ You've got me vexed, but I've beat you, so I demand respect/ You better treck (go away) and act like Wu-tang said and protect ya neck/ - Herb..............al has been smoke like the herb he is............post ya verse trick............................................. ................
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09-30-03, 04:59 PM | #3 | |
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nice verse.........................i'll have alook and give some feedbk wen this chump posts...........................................
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09-30-03, 05:33 PM | #4 | |
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dark cursiv u fukin idiot ure illiterate/
if battle is mean for the elite then im tha best candidate/ puttin sick shit in ya dreams/ fuck freddy and jason ill do u like samara from the ring/ a mortal u can kill me physically/ but ill haunt u mentally & drastically change u lyrically/ im a walking soliliquoi and talking simile/ seriously breakin up all of yo wit and soul intricately/ im like neal(matrix)cuz i brake all the rules of reality/ yo verses drop dead in they tracks from herbals grab-a-tea/(gravity) who?(drastik measures)is that the best u can do?/ those rhymes sound like random letters pulled from an alphabet stew/ murda half of ure crew im flawless/ u secretly fear me inside when i ride like william wallace/ this fu honestly thinks that he is sick/ i agree wit u because u must be to think u can spit/ u must be insane ill leave ya cololess like acid rain/ tryin hard to maintain wit all dis pain put on ya brain/ no more just cease quit tryin to breathe/ let it go homie just let ure rb career rest in peace/ similar to a mut in old age full of fleaz/ im dat champ pit pimpin it in oldnavys performance fleece/ |
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10-01-03, 02:30 AM | #5 | |
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uppin
come on yall vote honestly please detailed and shit who won why? who lost why?? |
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10-01-03, 03:36 AM | #6 | |
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where the feedback yo??????
votes detailed and shit lets close this one out fast oh yeah peep open mic for KRU collaboration and critique it thanks yall i will be havin 100 soon and i will return favors |
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10-01-03, 03:36 AM | #7 |
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hmmm.....
flow-herbal punches-both were weak wordplay-herbal structure-herbal, too much bullshit goin on in cursiv's multi's-herbal vote-herbal took it...cursiv's punches were played and flow was weak |
10-01-03, 06:19 AM | #8 | |
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IP: 6F9E F23B
uppin..................................1st up................................................ ...........................don't sleep on it..........................peace
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10-01-03, 09:35 AM | #9 | |
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Dark Cursiv had this with better flow and vocab and wordplay.....
The other guy had some good hits but his flow was so off and check this too.... im like neal(matrix)cuz i brake all the rules of reality/ Like NEAL from the MATRIX? Who the fluck in neal man,,, thats so funny it NEO you dumb ass...... anyways apart from that you iight....but DC gets my vote Yo DC go try out in the contagious crew forum son we could use some new talent. |
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10-01-03, 12:28 PM | #10 | |
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Uppin for votes........................................2nd up....................stop sleepin on this, it's pissin me off, get it ended, got some battles lined up and can't battle til this ends
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10-01-03, 03:05 PM | #11 | |
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yo, DC ama start wit u first... what are u spittin? one liners??? anybody can spit one liners... but thats more of the way it looks then sounds... 2nd i aight gonna quote nothin cuz im lazy but to me ur punches were kinda lazy too didnt put nothin behind them... 3rd ur syllable count was kinda off in ur multi's made it all stop and go, tight that u threw those out there but just get them perfected and shit..... All in all U had some punches towards the end that were kinda nice so i know u can do better shit then this...
aiight this is herbals section... i like the use of vocabulary, thats something i didnt see wit DC... that neo neal thing was kinda gay and shit, but we all know what u meant, but get shit straight next time.... as wit DC ur shit did not flow most of the time, cuz u have a long ass line followed by like three werds and shit... that not good.... u had some repitition which was good id quote but lazyness comes in to play.... alright here it go... flow - herbal got this cuz his shit wasnt as bad as DC punches - DC gets it cuz had more but no ones really hit wordplay - Herbal got this for the simple fact that it was better Usage of Skillz (multis, alliteration, etc...) Herbal, he used repitition which is good, DC had multis but didnt do it how he should... VOTE- ME CUZ SMOKE BOTH YA ASSES, REAL VOTE- Herbal
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10-01-03, 03:38 PM | #12 |
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I think Herbal got dis
both had da multis going, Herb had more but dis is how it went down Flow = Herb (DC's flow was on point but i was feeling H's more) Multis = Both Punches = Herb (DC had few good ones) Metas = Herb Wordplay = None Creativity = Herb Structure = Both Personals = None (H had 1 but not enuff to state) Overall = Herb got this from da other verses I read from DC, i see he elevatin, good multis goin on there, but work on yer disses more and its best to have a diss in every line instead of every other line....... vote = Herbal p.s. what kinda name is that??????? lolol hit these battles up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82689 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82689 |
10-01-03, 06:04 PM | #13 | |
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uppin
in responce to c drama my name is something of an inside joke here at my home town wit my friends if u must know than u can ask me in a personal message or u can look at my battle with sl1ck there is a brief explanation in that battle of how my name came to be thanks for honest vote ill be sure to return the favor hollllllllllllllla |
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10-02-03, 12:38 AM | #14 | |
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aye yo aye yo yoyoyooyoyoyoyoyo................................. ............
.................................................. ......................... .................................................. ............... .............. vote please and detailed shit only hollllllla |
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10-02-03, 07:37 AM | #15 | |
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uppin, uppin..........................3rd time..............................
don't sleep on this
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