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Old 10-01-03, 11:53 PM   #2
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Before was definitely better than After...

The lines just seemed to connect much better...

in After it's a lot of "blah blah blah rhyme, blah blah blah rhyme"

Before has much better internal rhyming structure...

personally i think spelling means a lot if you want to post text lyrics...im not hating, im jus tired of wading through endless varis of everybody's typeslang... ya feel?

keep on working, id like to see some more positive minded verse from you... but not saying you should switch topics...

{Peace}
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Carson, you aren't shit, so don't even post to me again. You suck at audio, you suck at text,and you suck at life. You and I both know that you would have lost 99% of your battles if you didn't have a voting ring and pick on the 9 year olds who join the site.
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