At times, when something so wonderful happens, something we have wanted so bad, it can be hard to actually believe it... and writing it is like rejoicing in it. I see you rejoicing here.. Its like you have written this down because you were bursting with emotion and I love that.
I wouldnt say its not poetic writing, granted its not a conventional style of poetry, but it has the emotion of true verse, the beauty, a poetic love letter addressed to the universe if you will.. Emotion isnt always meant to rhyme, isnt meant to be structured, sometimes that just complicates what it is you are feeling when you write.
Really nice to read, Thank you for sharing your happiness with us, its always heartwarming to see, and Good Luck with your girl

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