well well....

for those who dont like reading things like this...
try writing a little letter on a piece of paper for
someone who you have a tad of interest in...
because this here is a paragraph..on paper or here...

Smooth this was done well and its not really that different...
all lyrics are poetry and poetry dosent need to rhyme...
you might have a rhyme for her and this might be
you speakin at the end of a song or something....

anyhow this was fine...but could you take some time
out to reply to other people like prophitt who take
time out to give you feedback on your own pieces

and oh..dare to be different..stand out from whats redundant..

la paz