thirty minutes later tha pigs arrived, tha coroners behind, everybody askin who didnt survive, at right around five//
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that had such a sad vibe to it...like im scared to go out now thinkin im either get raped or what not

your structure is something that sticks with you i can see
the single bar double line theory is one you like

the theme was great kind asad tho
but nonetheless good peice