For a Freestyle this was pretty good. You have some knowledge of wordplay and we seen some signs of it wanting to break out..
"ya rhyme structure put together like jenga and im knockin it over/"
You had some good meta's as well:
"your sinkin like an anchor only faster/ - flow brought to ya block watch it cuz its hot as sun spots"
Try toe xpand your vocab a bit, it was some what simple. but some you showed some potential in order to elavte on this. AS for the rhymin', the first bar was dope as fuck:
"better drop when my names talked, got the glock cocked ready for shots/
flow brought to ya block watch it cuz its hot as sun spots/" - seen 7 rhymin words there!
overall: 3/5, alright for a freestyle..but up your vocab and keep rhymin'
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Thanx.