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Old 10-12-03, 11:31 PM   #4
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Yeah this was a alright piece....it flowed alright i thought through out the piece...vocab could be up'd though..try adding some multies and internals to make it flow better...but it was a alright drop overall...keep at it..and keep dropping.
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