damn i hate to be yet another quote
flow was your best aspect here...prefect it!
vocab was rather simple... dont be afraid to use big words
if people who read it dont know what it is, and they like your drop, they will go and find out what it means
www.dictionary.com works wonders

if you would be so kind
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84636