Feather kisses upon my cheek
The nameless wonder I dare not speak
To caress me dearly, leave me weak

~thats good..I dont know why....
then again maybe I do or think about it~

This is your thunder, in my skies
Your pleading, begging wake up cries
To miss deception, but realize…

I’m merely sleeping
More so dreaming
The things awake I don’t admit to thinking…

~I think you probaly had about four more parts to this
because it seems like one off those long ass poems
in those published books...ill read your long ass poetry
and like it if your willing to show it...please...peace~