Thread: rule vs grim
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Old 10-13-03, 10:47 PM   #9
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i dunno about that^^...heres my break down

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GRIM

battles aint much different that with ya mmo cuz you always "cum" second/
called him a dumbass and he said "im smart i reckoned"/
^^personal^^

i laugh at ya rhymes, chew and spit 'em out like gum/
i could down you with a cup like i was drinkin rum/
^^aight punch^^

this 15 mins is killing him the suspence is soo tight/
its only a 30 second death if you can read alright/
^^awesome finisher^^

RULE

Free agent? More like "i'll pay you if you let me be on you cd"
Sure you can be on my cd, heres a diss track, its called "wona be"
^^meh...ok punch i guess^^

im down to my last bar and your tripping like you overdost on anastedics
Hulisinting like you beat me but im'a tell you thi, calling me out you'll live to regret it
^^pretty good finsher^^

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