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rule 3 42.86%
GriM EviL 4 57.14%
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Old 10-13-03, 09:59 PM   #1
pCe
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rule vs grim

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10 lines
u first
15 mins
no dr c h votes
no feeding/biting

15 mins from your check in

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Old 10-13-03, 10:02 PM   #2
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iight checkin in...g'luck ...40 characters fuckin shit.............................................. ........
 
Old 10-13-03, 10:11 PM   #3
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Alright so what the fuck do you exspect to do 10 lines max?
Only gives me five bars to leave you lyrically bitch slapped

Grim Evil, do you chill wit the devil or you just an evil puppet
I could assinate you puppet show but its already gay so fuck it

Free agent? More like "i'll pay you if you let me be on you cd"
Sure you can be on my cd, heres a diss track, its called "wona be"

Now im not gay but i just "cumed" all over you Grem Evil
Your a joke you remind me of'a Jackass movie are you the sequal?

im down to my last bar and your tripping like you overdost on anastedics
Hulisinting like you beat me but im'a tell you thi, calling me out you'll live to regret it
 
Old 10-13-03, 10:21 PM   #4
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^^ya ok now await the merking

this cat spit so much "shit" his ass enys his mouth and tongue/
you cant come outta ya dick yet caus you way too young/
this kid blows all men outta the water...i mean litterally/
you need to look over yor prewritten...over alitteracy/
battles aint much different that with ya mmo cuz you always "cum" second/
called him a dumbass and he said "im smart i reckoned"/
i laugh at ya rhymes, chew and spit 'em out like gum/
i could down you with a cup like i was drinkin rum/
this 15 mins is killing him the suspence is soo tight/
its only a 30 second death if you can read alright/

pCe
 
Old 10-13-03, 10:25 PM   #5
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good ish...g'luck..peace...let the votes in..1............................................. .............................................
 
Old 10-13-03, 10:29 PM   #6
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uppin_1_





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Old 10-13-03, 10:41 PM   #7
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bein slept on uppin_2_



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Old 10-13-03, 10:42 PM   #8
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this was a pretty weak battle, but heres my breakdown....

structure-tie
flow-tie
vocab-tie
wordplay-tie
punches-rule
personals-neither
overall-rule

both of u need to elevate but rule takes this....

peace.......
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Old 10-13-03, 10:47 PM   #9
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i dunno about that^^...heres my break down

best lines

GRIM

battles aint much different that with ya mmo cuz you always "cum" second/
called him a dumbass and he said "im smart i reckoned"/
^^personal^^

i laugh at ya rhymes, chew and spit 'em out like gum/
i could down you with a cup like i was drinkin rum/
^^aight punch^^

this 15 mins is killing him the suspence is soo tight/
its only a 30 second death if you can read alright/
^^awesome finisher^^

RULE

Free agent? More like "i'll pay you if you let me be on you cd"
Sure you can be on my cd, heres a diss track, its called "wona be"
^^meh...ok punch i guess^^

im down to my last bar and your tripping like you overdost on anastedics
Hulisinting like you beat me but im'a tell you thi, calling me out you'll live to regret it
^^pretty good finsher^^

punches-grim
personlas-grim
flow-both
structure-rule

overall-grim
 
Old 10-13-03, 10:49 PM   #10
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structure-tie
flow-tie
vocab-tie
wordplay-tie
punches-rule
personals-neither
overall-rule

rule threw better punches and so didnt grim but not as strong as rules
rules got my vote
 
Old 10-13-03, 10:55 PM   #11
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i dont know how your beating me but aight...uppin_3_





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Old 10-13-03, 11:07 PM   #12
UNSTOPABLE_MC
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that was weak no doubt but ima go with grim on this one wit the punches...they hit harder and were all through out...sum of rules wasnt that great or didnt hit hard

no hate
vote-grim evil
 
Old 10-13-03, 11:17 PM   #13
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Quote:
Originally posted by FATAL_LYRICS
i dunno about that^^...heres my break down

best lines

GRIM

battles aint much different that with ya mmo cuz you always "cum" second/
called him a dumbass and he said "im smart i reckoned"/
^^personal^^

i laugh at ya rhymes, chew and spit 'em out like gum/
i could down you with a cup like i was drinkin rum/
^^aight punch^^

this 15 mins is killing him the suspence is soo tight/
its only a 30 second death if you can read alright/
^^awesome finisher^^

RULE

Free agent? More like "i'll pay you if you let me be on you cd"
Sure you can be on my cd, heres a diss track, its called "wona be"
^^meh...ok punch i guess^^

im down to my last bar and your tripping like you overdost on anastedics
Hulisinting like you beat me but im'a tell you thi, calling me out you'll live to regret it
^^pretty good finsher^^

punches-grim
personlas-grim
flow-both
structure-rule

overall-grim


to sum it all up^^punches and personals got it for grim..it was a whack nattle no doubt but still i think grim had a bit better...no hate
 
Old 10-13-03, 11:24 PM   #14
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^^^^are you fucking kidding me..w/e..aiight...lol........................
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Old 10-13-03, 11:28 PM   #15
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i think i won...w/e though good battle and no beef......uppin_5_................................ ..




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