ok, not a bad drop, flow wasnt bad, maybe could use more multies and ish to make it flow better...vocab could use some upping....content, not bad but you could have came harder with ya some of ya punches...overall not bad....keep dropping son...

and if you get a chance could you check out my latest open mic and hit me up with some feedback....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85644