mc explicit is only harcore cuz he licks the shaft
bum whole is so loose he's always catching a draft
check your verses man, there choppy - mine are a breeze
flowing like crazy, leaving the kid shakin in the knees
check his verses - he thinks he got with my mom and did some backdoor
well i had your whore on the floor and she was screamin for more
the guy drops wack verses in open mic, and thinks that hes great
his favorite song is wanksta just cuz he knows he relates
and you know i could kill your ass in a battle - or do it for chuckles
but toe to toe - youd get a face full of my fist, like sonic and knuckles
but i aint no sega shit, thats you - my rhymes are x box
x for the rating, the newest and best rhymes are on lock
you got the lettering in your name wrong - its not MC
dont worry ill help you out, say it with me "F" "A" "G"
the guy thinks hes a rap superhero, the rap game to defend
he picked up the right tape - his favorite movie is "XXX MEN"
so stop spittin weak verses in my posts, and stop talkin bout my mom
or ill show that you bite verses- your computer history is "rhyme.com"
now your prolly just a punk ass computer nerd, but you gotta get with it
your rhymes are fucking rated 'G' - you aint ever been explicit

punk bitch
fuckin with me is your death wish
next time you bad mouth me ill leave your punk as in the ditch
cut you up so bad your baby dick is the only thing that'll twitch

holla '1'

that was pretty good homie......i was feelin the closer to ur verse, that was ill........ur vocab and wordplay were ok.......next time try and include more multis and metas though.........ur content and topic was a little played, but it was still good......overall not a bad drop, u got ability holmes......

peace.......

ok, not a bad drop, flow wasnt bad, maybe could use more multies and ish to make it flow better...vocab could use some upping....content, not bad but you could have came harder with ya some of ya punches...overall not bad....keep dropping son...

and if you get a chance could you check out my latest open mic and hit me up with some feedback....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85644

Yeah this was a bad drop...it flowed pretty decent through out the verse i thought could have been a bit better...i agree with MonStar could have used more multies in there but it was ok...vocab could have been better though...Overall it wasnt too bad...keep at it.....and keep dropping.

uppin more feedback

more feedback please

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i think the biggest thing this verse lacked was flow, work on ya wordplay, add some multi's and your shit'll be dope..

favorite line : its not mc don't worry ill help you out, say it with me F-A-G sounds like some eminem 8-mile shit your shits dope and I think could get dopper as the clock ticks................one




the reaper bronx with a heat seeker

LOL...No personals go bite somewhere else

wtf are u talking about red dragon...this bitch mc explicit has been posting wack verses in my shit for ages...so i got him back

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lol

redragon thinks hes hot like toast just cuz hes got 500 posts
but thats no reason to sit and just coast, cuz your record aint nothing to boast

just plain nasty

nice shit u had good vocab nice rhyme scheme a lil bit of wordplay u had the works in this piece good drop. ur finisher was dope cuz. big ups my nigga.

holla

uppin for more feedback....i havent seen or heard of mc. explicit since i dropped this shit...holla

Lmao kid records don't mean shit....plus if you kids had serious beef you'd get a lil personals and posts don't mean shit either it's skill that means pretty much everything for all i know you could of bitten that verse cause theres no personals.You diden't have to write this diss right away if i was you i'd have a few lines going thru my head about him before i post and whack verses don't mean shit.Your whack too LOL...0-4 lmfao elavate before you start shit with me your not on my level