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Old 10-15-03, 12:31 PM   #5
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but the world it like a time bomb waitin for the next epidemic,
but we still live our lives, goin on striving to be academic

best line cos it had most complex rhyme play, but the structure and flow was solid, could be tweaked

the vocab and content was aight, seems like you rely on the last word to be the biggest, and yeah the topics played...it was a good effort, but it just did nt spark if you get me
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