Sleeping and feathers... maybe it's just me and my mind... but I got the thought in my head that this was about kinky sex.

Personally, I actually liked the lucid feel this had to it. I dunno how you did it but you did.

Those three lines a verse had me bugging. I got the feel of the beat in me so it's always four lines for stuff. Not three, three doesn't flow. And indeed, I stumbled in reading your peice a bit too. But suprisingly, the first and last verses flowed amazingly well. I was impressed to say the least.

Much respect for this.

~Shalom~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.