I dug this quite a bit.

It was dense. Yet with a gradual 'flow'.

I read it more darkly than you wrote it. (Or at least so it seems. You could be hiding some dark, demented thoughts behind the relative beauty..er, or something like that..) As that's how i 'related' to it. "the things awake i dont admit to thinking". Though i never deny anything i think of. As mirky or dark as it may be. To myself anyway. To others i don't. Not always.

You know they say that the imagination is a great way of understanding the world around you. From the details, to the bigger picture. That most definetly includes dreams.

Something made me think it was once or twice over elaborated. But the way i read it, i couldn't put my finger on it. So maybe it aint there.

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