Intriguing.

Short. Some words used made me pause. Like sinlessness. Is that an actual word? I guess it is. The state of being sinless i presume.

I liked how you approached it. Writing less to structure. More to your thoughts an emotions. Brought with it an atmosphere that suited it fine.

I think it's a piece about Jesus Christ. Or God. Your plea to him/it to show mercy. To explain what exactly you are doing. It was very, er...human. With undertones of your 'relation' to him/it.

ALong those lines.

I actually liked reading this. Though some words seemed mis-spelled. It could've been done on purpose.

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