Banned for Stupidity
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IP:
Please, try to work on your structure so it is a little easier for people to pick up on your flow ..
I'm dope like soap. .
You can't cope my rope.
^ Kinda like that
All aspects of the writing could be elevated also. The vocabulary was quite basic, as well as the thoughts and ideas expressed, but this was expected from a keystyle. Just keep writing and elevating, and you'll turn out fine.
Stay up and keep droppin.
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