Structure means nothing if you can read your own writing..
I honestly cant stand when people say things such as that..
but everyones not the same...deacon I like what you did here...

~Measure my faith in a matter of T.I.M.E
a Tiny Interlude Mydst Eternity~

that was well done bring out your own version of it...

my body a chapel to council my brothers
your word conserves me to reach out to others
embody me to acknowledge all truth
You are the way, the name, my root

~this was good as well..saying to God that your
merely a passanger of his plane...theres another
phrase involving instruments but I cant think
of itat the moment but this was well written deacon,
I would say the saying goes
'we're all instruments of his orchestra'
but thats not it eitirely~

as for lyrics its all poetry...gods mentioned in many
'rappers' lyrics poets are rappers and coffeehouse
rockers..im sick of simpletons but deacon you know
what I mean...right?