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Old 10-21-03, 11:38 AM   #9
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This was a nice drop... good vocab, multis... my only beef with this post was the line...

'Be-A-Poetic-Musician, I’m Like The Electric Magician…
The Retarded Edition, Although A Rhythmical Electrician...'

Seemed to wordy to me... just sounds like a bunch of words compressed together 'cause they rhymed... you know. Mabye it sounds better than it reads.... Dunno.... Peace...
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