On a site like this, with the amount of members there are, you are bound to get more than one person posting love poetry.. However each has their own style, word use, emotional expression etc etc.. So instead of looking at this as just another love poem look for its uniqueness.

existance, you do have your own style, and its good.. You say what you feel, expressed well, and its written well. The only critique I'd have is Whats With Using A Capital In Every Word. Ive seen it a few times.. and I just don't get it. If anything, it takes the emphasis away from particular parts of your pieces that you may be trying to emphasise, if that makes sense..

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