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Old 10-26-03, 10:15 AM   #19
Miami305
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You Couldnt Comprehend Fire...If You Were Surounded By Gay Men
^Whoever thinks thats a punch is a dumbass.

You're Fallin Faster Than Leaves Of Fall Trees Bein Shaken
^WHOA!! Yea right.. a played lil topic with a simple example.

Rhymes Couldn't Get To A Climax If You Set A Match On The G Spot
You Aint Got The Heat To Lock A Win... I Merked You Wit A Key Shot
^Wack ass hell set-up, i dunno how many times i heard that, the punch was ight nothing creative.

Prewritten To The Grave... And You Still Aint Copped A Win
What Makes You Think This Is Gon Be Different?... Your Battlin A Veteran
^OUCH!!, haha yea right, wack as hell, a big ego line for a punch

Look At Your Style You're Bringin A New Meanin To The Word Throw Back
Rockin A Pac Avy Aint Been In Since Michael Jackson Was Still Black
^Tight ass hell closer, best lines in whole verse, everything else was wack.

U didnt have flow either...


my record is 0-2, with 2 hurtins......(NOT!)/
well imma even this out against u and kclipz 4 murkin/
^Lol, shit was funny.

ill leave u sad and hummbled, so u can go onto OPRAH/
and talk about how a lightweight flowed ya(up)/
^I found this funny, shit was nice. Simple yet funny.

im gonna make u turn around ur intrest and occupation/
so u can go join the herb garden......a HUGE adaptation!/
^Nothing special...

heres a "TOKEN" of my appretiation/
its to hot to say, so imma leave it in abbreviations........FU/
^Tight closer, shit made me laugh...

Ur flow was better thans Token, ur format wasen't. u had better punches, token didnt,

BirdRaw wins...