Thread: Phlawless-Talon ft. Crazy B
View Single Post
Old 10-27-03, 05:11 PM   #2
rule
..Soft Focus..
 
rule's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,639
From: Ont.
IP:

i think this collab needs work from bnoth verses...first verse was stronger then 2nd but i think you both could have enhanced yourt structure and flow, some good wordplay creativity but i think you could have both done better....but with out a doubt this was an okie read peace 6.5/10
  Reply With Quote