I like this track. I'm feeling your style and your voice. Emotion was nice. Should have normalized your vocals to be a little bit louder, or maybe make your adlibs a little louder. Some parts of the song are real clear, but then sometimes it sounds like your running out of breath and your voice fades a bit. Work on your delivery to get rid of that, or maybe you didn't use Dynamics Processing in Cool Edit. I dunno. The track was nice though, I'm feeling the whole idea that you portrayed here. Real nice drop bro.