ight lsitenin now...beat seems koo little freaky type shit...quality could be upped...ya could move a little away from the mic...will help...could use ads...but ya lyrics are nice man...flow and delivery is ight...to many high volume parts...but ya lyrics are nice overall the whole thing...nice shit...
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