Flow was ok, bit chopped up at the end but its all good
vocab was great
chorus was nice
overall it was an ok piece to read..
btw thx for feedback on my piece sorry i havent got a chance to drop on yours for awhile stuffs always busy round here.. anyways stay up
peace

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