Monster -
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Dis is striving for cock.. this bitch, I`ll never flatter
cause his life is based on balls... like dangerous batters
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eh... 6/10
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but none of this matters.. you dont really wanna fight
we all know ur...
scared of the monster, like a kid shook during the night
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eh 6/10... simile to simple, weak punch
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and 13th's always ran out the ghetto.. it just wont cease
even his manhood packed up its shit.. and told duke peace
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umm... funny thought but not a good punch 7.5/10
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& i promise i know whats right.. let me explain the deal
and theres no punchline.. but my next one tells whats real
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............ u were right no punchline, terrible piece of shit right there, really killed your verse.... 0/10
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ur a rookie in this game dawg.. like Carmelo.. u cant plug it
cause when you get past the hype.. ur still a fuckin nugget
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lol... 9/10
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and please know..
Monster is deadly when equipped w/ machetes, its ur fate
when i put a cave in ur chest.. so bears can fuckin hibernate
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whack, whack, whack... you gonna shoot him through his IP? can't reach him through the internet connection... I kno d-blocks hott right now but this is the i-net... 2/10
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at any rate.. i`ll slaughter you.. you fuckin w/ me?, please.
Everyone knows i`m above you ... like the seven and eight keys
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ight wordplay 7/10
Dont take this as anything but constructive critiscm. It wasn't that bad, you're good, just need some refining.
13th
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Fag...i peeped the Mag....thinkin u'll win u must've of lost it..
Monster's not the boogey man..but he's still remains in the closet
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lol... played but funny 7/10
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& ur drops leak..like a runny faucet...this is a waste of my text...
was gonna feed but chose Subway..cuz u havin nuthin 2 eat fresh
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... eh... coulda been reworded n made it better, but good idea. 6/10 runny faucet lines played
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let me guess...thinkin u'll rise?...not even if u ate a packet of yeast
harder punches 2 monster now we'll all see the mark of the beast
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u really need to work on the way you place your words, cuz u got good ideas but necessarily carry'em out right
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Geez!..been doin this longer...wit ur verse u musta thouht i'm new
but i'll bring a more Solid line to this Area...and add Volume. 2!....
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...5/10
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ur through...its over..done...how easily i'm kickin ur ass bitch....
whats funny...kid's afraid of himself...last week he Dodged Stratus
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7/10
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more to this matter....he's outta his league...fuck outta ur class...
herez the facts...last week was half...now ima drop a whole ass
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damn... that takes the cake right here for this battle. 10/10
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alas..the closer..okay i'ma end it..then go back to my audio rappin
^speakin of which..it woulda been done but after readin ur verse..
I WAS TOO BUSY LAUGHIN!!!!!
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eh... played 6/10
overall battle wasn't too bad, Monster just fell off horrendously at some places. Then 13ths second to last line killed it. I think 13th came with better and more consistent punches. Keep battlin y'a'll.
vote - 13th