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Check In Due: Wednesday 11-05-03
Verses Due: Friday 11-07-03

Good Luck & Drop Whole Assed....

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i am really starting to hate text battling....but in......whateva.....

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I dig you on the text flip homie.

Lets drop early.

So we can get this shit out the way.

I`m sure we both got shit to do this week.

Your the vet so go ahead and drop first.

I'll match you.

Good luck to ya man, much respect.

okay....quick key for this kid...i got other things i rather be doing...


Fag...i peeped the Mag....thinkin u'll win u must've of lost it..
Monster's not the boogey man..but he's still remains in the closet
& ur drops leak..like a runny faucet...this is a waste of my text...
was gonna feed but chose Subway..cuz u havin nuthin 2 eat fresh
let me guess...thinkin u'll rise?...not even if u ate a packet of yeast
harder punches 2 monster now we'll all see the mark of the beast
Geez!..been doin this longer...wit ur verse u musta thouht i'm new
but i'll bring a more Solid line to this Area...and add Volume. 2!....
ur through...its over..done...how easily i'm kickin ur ass bitch....
whats funny...kid's afraid of himself...last week he Dodged Stratus
more to this matter....he's outta his league...fuck outta ur class...
herez the facts...last week was half...now ima drop a whole ass
alas..the closer..okay i'ma end it..then go back to my audio rappin
^speakin of which..it woulda been done but after readin ur verse..
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I WAS TOO BUSY LAUGHIN!!!!!

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R-O-F-L-M-M-F-A-O.

So much for the predictions that were made in the magazine this week. Good luck big mouth. Becuase your surely gonna need nothing short of a miracle. Upping for some votes now.

lol....way to sway dick fuck.......eh.....either way....the predictions
will still come true.......ur still a noob.....and act like one.............

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Monster -

eh... 6/10
eh 6/10... simile to simple, weak punch
umm... funny thought but not a good punch 7.5/10
............ u were right no punchline, terrible piece of shit right there, really killed your verse.... 0/10
lol... 9/10
whack, whack, whack... you gonna shoot him through his IP? can't reach him through the internet connection... I kno d-blocks hott right now but this is the i-net... 2/10
ight wordplay 7/10

Dont take this as anything but constructive critiscm. It wasn't that bad, you're good, just need some refining.

13th
lol... played but funny 7/10
... eh... coulda been reworded n made it better, but good idea. 6/10 runny faucet lines played
u really need to work on the way you place your words, cuz u got good ideas but necessarily carry'em out right
...5/10
7/10
damn... that takes the cake right here for this battle. 10/10
eh... played 6/10

overall battle wasn't too bad, Monster just fell off horrendously at some places. Then 13ths second to last line killed it. I think 13th came with better and more consistent punches. Keep battlin y'a'll.

vote - 13th

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Bars Of War - Champ
L.L.L. - Former HWeight Champ
S.S. - Hall Of Fame

The Eclipse...

^ I respect your vote but you gave him 7/10 on the dodge startus line. How did I dodge myself? But you cryed about my hibernate line?

Not to mention my points added up to more than his.

0-1.

Real votes please.

I checked the points.. & monster had 37.5... 13th had 41.00...
Moster the vote counts.. i think you missed the one line were you
said "this isnt a punch".. he gave that a 0/10..

1-0 13th... i'll vote tommorow

and u Dodged Stratus cuz u changed ur name herbie.....stop
bitchin....and actin like a newb...do that in frontlines.............

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13th got this
better punches,,, or at least hit harder
monster had a few decent lines but alot of filler in there which really detracted from his shit
pretty weak battle..word play was below standards
but 13 th had the more consistent verse even though it seemed rushed

and im still laughing like fuck cos Mystery murdera thinks a machete is a gun..
hahahahahahaaahahahahah

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and please know..
Monster is deadly when equipped w/ machetes, its ur fate
when i put a cave in ur chest.. so bears can fuckin hibernate
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whack, whack, whack... you gonna shoot him through his IP? can't reach him through the internet connection... I kno d-blocks hott right now but this is the i-net... 2/10
^lmao

stratus just give it up dawg, your verse was weak, dont come in my battle jockin me...

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L.L.L. - Former HWeight Champ
S.S. - Hall Of Fame

The Eclipse...

lol, and I meant to stay "stab" him through his IP...

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1st Battle In Legends
Bars Of War - Champ
L.L.L. - Former HWeight Champ
S.S. - Hall Of Fame

The Eclipse...