this was a nice read, although it was sad, it held alot of emotion, alot of pain and perhaps some anger.

this is a piece that i would love to hear in audio

the flow was nice, and i liked the short structure, and seeing as this piece was meant more for message and getting feelings across it will cover up an ything that might not be up to standard, but i cant find anything. i think the vocab was better in this piece left simple.

this piece was felt, you have a gift in getting feelings across. good luck with the x and Destinie. i saw pics of you and her in the memeber pics made me think very highly of you, and i can tell how much love you have for her, keep care.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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