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Old 11-07-03, 01:02 PM   #1
bouncedoggydog
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Innocent Eye's (A childs struggle with divorce)

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(Opening Hook)
Look…Watch those tears fall
From innocent eye’s…
A pain deeply embedded
In her heart and in her mind…
A child starving, not from hunger
But from family ties…
Another Soul forgotten
Through the shuffle of time…

(Rap)
Her present’s in a mess
And her future’s in distress
It’s time to put this all to rest
And do for HER what’s only best
Feel the struggle in her mind
Taste the sorrow of her time
Responsibility yours and mine
And a hatred redefined
She's acting out and crossing lines
Can’t you see this are you blind?
While our daughters heart is crying
No we can not keep denying
Cuz inside I know she’s dying…

(Closing hook)
Listen…Hear those broken dreams
Lost to sobering cries…
Her innocence is stolen
Not considered a crime…
Hear the sorrow, hear the anguish,
Thinking love is just a lie…
A world upside down
Happiness she can not find…



This was just a short piece I worte after having a conversation with my daughter. I have a degree in child devlopment and seen the conflict in her eyes. I used this song to approach her Mother in a way that only emotion could. I put every ounce of emotion into the recording and sent it to My X. She got the message without argument and we have been working at healing the damage our seperation has caused our daughter. Things are getting better for her (Destinie) now.

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