You want a critique..? You got it...


Everyday...


turn your vocals up slightly...
intro... was to long... slightly boring...
your voice is annoying...
an average day in my hood song is played... has been for about 9 years...
lyrics blah...
rhyme scheme good...
punches... none... and I don't mean battle punches... I mean punches as in something to make me say OOOooh... nice... NONE...
beat was ok... not great...




Smoken My life Away...

Yet again... Songs content is blah... these songs went out 9 years ago...
Vocals alot better...
whoever's first... probably Yung... good flow... rhyme scheme... eh...
2nd: flow slightly better than everyday... still choppy... rhyme sheme is eh... yet once again...
nothing but you're dumb ass comments made me keep listening... Make a song someone will want to listen to...


Gangsta that...


The Opening wasn't hot at all...
content was kinda ok still played...
wordplay was played...
although not that bad... best joint from you hands down...
flow was alot better...
Punches alot better...
Best beat you picked so far...
but the whole... "yall gangstas right..? I'm the hardest gangsta and this is why" shit is played...
No one who I know that listened believes you... but get ya start
that laugh and what not at 2:10 isn't hot... could've ended it alot better...


All in all 1 out of 3 songs was ok... 4-10...


once again...

If I don't like it... I don't like it... That don't mean that I'm hatin...
-Common


Look at that... see what you want to work on... I'm not gonna hold ya fuckin hand... that wasn't only a critique... it was my opinion... so If you're gonna be in the game... grow some nuts...



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