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This wasn't that good. .I mean walter wall you came really really basic, I read it through like 4 times to see if I missed anything & im pretty sure I didn't, It was just really basic, But akira your flow outshone walter by quite a bit escpecially towards the end. .It generally picked up near the end & its nice to see a metaphor in your piece. .
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