they were ok drops for newbies, trust me....i have seen much worse, Walter i lyked how you played tha roll of tha lil boy....it enhcanced tha story greatly, i lyked tha imagary in akiro son bio's
tha break down:

Walter Wall- Rhyme Scheme: 6, Flow: 7, Story: 8, Total: 21
Akiro Son Bio- Rhyme Scheme: 6, Flow: 6.5, Story: 7, Total: 19.5

my vote goes to walter, your story won it for you, you need to work on your rhyme scheme, and akiro elevate your story telin, no hard feelins, peep my ish, stay real, peace, 1

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