wow this was two carzy out looks and had some wierd switches...Finding that no one bothered to judge this i will give my effort...

Mad man...you came nice with alot of word play..Not too complex but simple to the point of a nice easy read..i loved the switch up on the perimedics and it kinda made me wonder...Could this really happen?..over all nice piece...

a2z....you had a nice verse as well i think your piece had really nice flow along with structure....wow the piece was something sad and instantly at the last two lines became sick and disgusting..i loved it..hahha you sick sick man

vote=a2z

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