First off, why did ya'll have to use Coalesce instead of Create or Make? Ya'll could of just went straight to the point but using a basic word, but no, ya'll had to use big words, lol. Anyway, pretty good battle. Mad Man, your verse was good. Descriptive, and stayed on topic, but it had the same concept as John Q. Other than that, good verse. Ass, your verse was pretty good as well. Descriptive, and had the reader focused from start to finish. The ending was sick as fuck though, yet funny as hell. Easy enough to say it caught me off gaurd. Good battle, but Ass gets my vote for bringing a better story, and being a little more descriptive.