Opening four or so lines were dope, nice flow and multi's wise, the internals worked, only real flkaw was the content cause it was like you were just rhyming syllables but with no point being made or saying anything, and that really let it down for me. Transition was decent, kept the piece moving along without dwindling on a particlar thought or idea for too long, held my interest, kept the flow nice, but still - content wise, i wasnt feeling this piece.

Sorry bro. = /