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Old 11-11-03, 11:48 PM   #5
Mr.Christensen
Fuck You, I Rhyme Better
 
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Hey can I get in Regime?

Hook...
Nice way of telling people who you are..

Sureal...
Nice approrach of telling people to be scared of Regime...good flow and vocab was impressive

Chrit...
ha ha ha you cocky fuck...but hey its true...the texas line was funny to me...but one thing WHO ARE THE WARLORDS?
If i havent heard of them, then they arent worth knowing

Aus...
I liked the verse, and i didnt know about he title belts
I only weight 158lbs is that good enough for lightweight?
Nice verse kid...

fgee...
damn...only 1 flaw...the line lenght seemed a tad too long
good flow and i liked the closer...some of the multies seems kinda forced...like 1 or 2

Bribe...
hmm, it was good just it didnt seem to say anything... just looked like filler...good filler, but just filler

Lady D...
ha ha i liked it...the lines were kinda long, you might want to shorten them but the flow you were going for was very well done

Haiku...
Wow...i loved the way you opened it..if you keep on with the site personals i would have loved it more...good job none the less...the line about your leader trying out is funny...but sad cause its true

Evolve...
I didnt know you were regime...hi there... this flowed and i can see why you are called one of the best text on the site...the style line is true...iv seen a few examples...I should talk...im a bad copy of ######... nice way to mention word perfect..good job

13th...
months? lol...nice way to tell them just who you are, and who they arent a part of...

overall good job kids! I liked it

Do you guys have a tryout roster?
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