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Old 11-11-03, 02:36 PM   #1
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Regime Collab:The Introduction

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yes yes....its another Regime production...its time for you all
to recognize the heads in the crew....recognize why we are the
illest...



RB's legacy... Regimes the best of the best...
Dont beef... Or end like WP... Put to rest...
Think you got talent? And can win.. never...
So fuck you... This Fam Rhymes better...
All facets covered... Cant touch Regime...
Audio and text... Hell we even own poetry...
Awake the sleeping giant... And breath ya last breath...
Cause here comes the intro... Of the faces of death




i think Sureal has sumthin to say


Dancing With Lies, Yet The Truth Enlightens.
Hard As They Try, Still Their Grip Tightens.
Lurking Shadows, Always Turn, Look Behind You.
Fears Straddled, Best Learn, We'll Remind You.
First Is The Spot, Second Is The Falling Out.
So Heres The Plot, At The Top, Without A Doubt.
Thoughts Sprout, Regime Always Leads The Way.
Lyrical Drought, Never Leave Us In Dissaray.
Answering It All, Even Rhetorical Questions.
Regime Never Falls, Enhance Viewer Discretion.

whats that?!...Chrit wants some of this shit!

Clear the way!!! As King Chrit enters the room...
Question my sexuality? Best consult ya girls womb...
Fucka rep. Regime's still the best.. Dont test us...
Quick to serve beef... Like steakhouses in Texas...
Overall the tops of the site... I opitimize this crew...
Whether it be topical, battle or audio...
...Without hesitation Chrit'll kill you
Too damn skillful... I dont care how cocky it sounds...
Cause I'll get a round of applause.. While you're applauded with rounds...
Pick up a mic? Nice try... I'll still lay you to rest...
I know the rep.. But you honestly think I just did text?...
Played personals galore... And kids that plagerize...
Gay punks wont even see tits when they life flashes before they eyes...
I hate to brag... but my sig pick says it all...
Best believe Chrit is and always will better than ya'll...
Step up and fall... Just watch the dynasty grow...
And I heard the talk so from Regime... FUCKA WARLORD...

ladies and gentleherbs....Auspicious!

Auspicious, Witness The Twisted Mind Cycle..
Under The Disciple, Fight Til' We Got 5 Titles..
Four Belts, Three Of Them We Hold Possession..
Crew, Topical, Heavy/Middle, Need Light Division..
Clip Ya Heart, Just To Rip Men aPart..
Wow, n' Three Of Us On The Top 10 Charts..
Imagine That, Heat Up..We Tear The Streets Up..
N' We Got More Hits Than Kids Who Got Beat Up..
Not Sum1 To Battle, I'll Show You Where The Proof Be..
We Dont Say We're Ill For Nuthin, Now Do We?..
I'll Tell You Im Ill, N' Go About My Business..
Cuz Gettin Merk'd By Me Is Suttin U Do Not Want 2 Witness..
Bitches.. You Asked Wut Fuckin Wit Me Is..
Step To Me.. Hate? Lemme Give U A Few Reasons..
One, I Dont Like You, So Laugh At Me
Two, Only Thing Stoppin Me Is Gravity..


RB's legacy... Regimes the best of the best...
Dont beef... Or end like WP... Put to rest...
Think you got talent? And can win.. never...
So fuck you... This Fam Rhymes better...
All facets covered... Cant touch Regime...
Audio and text... Hell we even own poetry...
Awake the sleeping giant... And breath ya last breath...
Cause here comes the intro... Of the faces of death


the infamous Fgee!

My origins irrelevant…cos my destinations conceiving a legend
Leaving impressions when questioned im the answer when mentioned
Under-rated text engine…under dog for so long I've become the blanket
Off the leash when I yank it…elevated beyond what you could imagine
I don’t know the meaning of average…when thoughts grasp my pencil
The lead fires words so ill mental…cuts enemies into a fuckin stencil
So hard it seems gentle…me and Regime got skills locked to such a degree
Were issuing bandages to emcees…..and we threw away the key!
So don't even bother to disagree…you'd just be denying the truth
Hell I'm a normal youth…a Scott representing principles of proof
A real talker barren of excuse…I let my scriptures paint the picture
Master pieces of literature…the puzzles nearly a complete elixir
A potion so hot it'll blister…any of you fucks standing in my way
Ha ha no wait…I meant when you're brushed aside in my wake

yall dont wanna fuck wit Bribeone!

Expression through words are usually typed out as I think.
sumerged in my thoughts are ideas as my mind starts to sink.
deep into passage ways I can take your least bit of imagination.
Elevation to break through gathers the readers infactuation.
Evaluation by others, bothers to pierce my thinking capsule.
to talk about everyday type actions without that daily hazzle.
Crush miniscule type thinkers with overwelming suggestion.
clear cavities clean with my words without needing congestion.
affliction is easy with ten foot type razor edged daggers.
knock all you fuckers off balance and leave the able footed with swaggers

New Member!...Sexy Lady of the crew....Lady Divinity!

I’m Just A Queen Repin Regime, Came In The Secene, Spittin Mercilessly Mean
At The Age Of 16 Already Splittin Spleans , Puttin Multiple Holes In Ya Jeans
Lady Divinity Opened The Gate, Flowz Heavy Weight, With 2 Much To State
Makin Niggahz Feel Raped, Can’t Talk Shit Like They Taped , Too Late
Earned My Repect, Burned My Neglect, With A Rep To Protect, I’m Not in Effect
Sit Back And Reflect, Watch Me React And Reject, Split Ya Wrists And Ya Neck
Sharp As A Blade, Tight As A Braid, These Rhymez Never Fade, I Persuade And Invade
Been In The Game And Outplayed Them, Played Men Outraged And Outweiged Them
Niggahz Ain’t On My Level They Fuckin Retarded ..Beef Started , They Callin Me Garbage
They Just Jealous Of Me, Getting Down One One Knee, Like They Ready To Propose
Lined Up In Rowz With A Roze With No Talent To Compose, That’s The Way It Goez
I Hunt You Down Stunt You Down, Run You Down, Gun You Down, Bood On The Ground
Remainz Never Found, What What What What Goes Around Comes Around

RB's legacy... Regimes the best of the best...
Dont beef... Or end like WP... Put to rest...
Think you got talent? And can win.. never...
So fuck you... This Fam Rhymes better...
All facets covered... Cant touch Regime...
Audio and text... Hell we even own poetry...
Awake the sleeping giant... And breath ya last breath...
Cause here comes the intro... Of the faces of death



whos this?..if u don't know now u know....Haiku!

Reppin After All This Time...But Seem Some Lost Their Tint
We Know Knights Fallen Already...But Shade Cant Take The Hint!
U Still in Shock Eh?...Funny...Was Never a Surprise...
Ask The Mods!....Since The Regime....
...........We Got C-Section to OPEN HIS EYES.
But all jokes aside, Regimes to Tough To Bend.....
Cuz Once Regime Dies...Whats Next?...RB Looks to The End
"Best Crew on RB"....Dont Be Stunned on What U Knew...
Chances Are.....
Everyone got a taste....Ur Crew leader Probly Tried For The Crew...(So True...)
Aint Going No where...Still Here For What We Came to Do...
Fuck Where Ur Crews At...Truth Is!...Regimes Already Been Through....
Aint Out Of Breath Yet...With All Thats at Stake?
Crews Thought Wed Take a Break...
............But The Top Never Looked So Great



No introduction really needed for this man....Evolve!

Evolve Master's Bars' Whether Sober Or Plastered
& Son's More Kids Than The Old Dirty Bastard
Iv'e Out Lasted Most Of These So Called Vets
So Im Called Real Cause Im As Real As It Gets
& Lets Not Forget, How I Keep Textee's In Check
Im Like Mikey's Nike's..
You Can't Wait To See What's Next
One Of The Illest In Text & Yes.. I Toot My Horn
Cause If It Wasn't For Me..
Alot Of Your Styles Wouldn't Be Born
No Need To Ramble On.. It's Not Even Worth It
I Dont Care How Nice You Think You Are
If Your Not Me.. Your Words Aint Perfect



oh yes...u know 13th got sumthin say....


U know Disciple...need i say more...look at the months of the year
12 all together no doubt...but thats until the 13th stepped here..
causin fears as u glance at the roster...too much talent intact....
quick facts...we'll son all the herbs...and leave their bitch slapped..
laugh at the wacks...wishin to be a member stay ridin our dick....
declinin them kids..but still let them suck it to taste of whats sick...
shit...even the invincible WordPerfect to a fall to the REgime...
but i implore just stay a fan....cuz there will be no U in the TEAM...
as the leader i'm mean...don't give a fuck i got a heart thats cold...
i'm bold & see all yall as steamed treated towels..how easy u fold!

RB's legacy... Regimes the best of the best...
Dont beef... Or end like WP... Put to rest...
Think you got talent? And can win.. never...
So fuck you... This Fam Rhymes better...
All facets covered... Cant touch Regime...
Audio and text... Hell we even own poetry...
Awake the sleeping giant... And breath ya last breath...
Cause here comes the intro... Of the faces of death



and its like that.....Regime niggaz.....like whoa



credit for hook goes to chrit
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Old 11-11-03, 04:44 PM   #2
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yall stop sleepin on this shit bitches.....
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Old 11-11-03, 05:32 PM   #3
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13th.. Dont Forget To Drop
Feedback On Three Pieces Or
This Will Be Closed.

Oh Yeah.. Dope Piece
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Old 11-11-03, 07:40 PM   #4
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um yeah....i know.....i already dropped feedback on three.....
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Old 11-11-03, 11:48 PM   #5
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Hey can I get in Regime?

Hook...
Nice way of telling people who you are..

Sureal...
Nice approrach of telling people to be scared of Regime...good flow and vocab was impressive

Chrit...
ha ha ha you cocky fuck...but hey its true...the texas line was funny to me...but one thing WHO ARE THE WARLORDS?
If i havent heard of them, then they arent worth knowing

Aus...
I liked the verse, and i didnt know about he title belts
I only weight 158lbs is that good enough for lightweight?
Nice verse kid...

fgee...
damn...only 1 flaw...the line lenght seemed a tad too long
good flow and i liked the closer...some of the multies seems kinda forced...like 1 or 2

Bribe...
hmm, it was good just it didnt seem to say anything... just looked like filler...good filler, but just filler

Lady D...
ha ha i liked it...the lines were kinda long, you might want to shorten them but the flow you were going for was very well done

Haiku...
Wow...i loved the way you opened it..if you keep on with the site personals i would have loved it more...good job none the less...the line about your leader trying out is funny...but sad cause its true

Evolve...
I didnt know you were regime...hi there... this flowed and i can see why you are called one of the best text on the site...the style line is true...iv seen a few examples...I should talk...im a bad copy of ######... nice way to mention word perfect..good job

13th...
months? lol...nice way to tell them just who you are, and who they arent a part of...

overall good job kids! I liked it

Do you guys have a tryout roster?
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Old 11-11-03, 11:49 PM   #6
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WORD...ALL YOU M'FUCKERS OWE ME FEEDBACK...
JUST CHOOSE RANDOMLY FROM THE SIG!
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Old 11-12-03, 01:25 AM   #7
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lol....i thought u was in Regime Topical cock muncher

and i'll peep ur shit...appreciate it man
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Old 11-12-03, 02:36 PM   #8
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Hmm...

Nobody thats not in Regime has left feedback on this...
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Old 11-12-03, 03:45 PM   #9
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I loved this introduction eventhough everybody knows regime.
All of you dropped really good verses and it's clear to see why regime are so powerful. I didnt find any flaws in it at all so all I can say is well done and keep it comin.
Can you return the favour and comment on this open mic:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91099
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Old 11-12-03, 11:05 PM   #10
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ye ill shorten mah linez
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Old 11-13-03, 01:09 AM   #11
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wasnt bad. i didnt read it all but
paid attention to the kids who deserve
attention.

ill give crit to chrit..
for one of the better heads in your crew i was let down.
you came with a cocky attitude that was somewhat needed
for a peice like this, but you didnt have the exciting captivating
emotion that it needed. you had soem played concept.. the beef-
steakhouse line was the oldest lines ive ever heard, and if
you made it to the leading record with lines like that then rb is
wack.. none the less, it wasnt that bad.
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Old 11-13-03, 01:53 AM   #12
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Old 11-13-03, 08:34 AM   #13
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holly shit, all of you came hardcore in this...i think this was a great read and a perfect way to show talent in your crew and rep it, good job...pz
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Old 11-13-03, 09:01 AM   #14
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it was real good...0on the whole, chrit was bottom of all the verses, his hook was hot, lady d i always liekd ur shit, this was noexception, evolve ur classic, surreal ur a beast, regime is the crew on rb, and i want in....im a post soem stuff soon to shwo my tru lyrical power hwo i devour lyrical cowards....
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