hey i had to go diggin to find this, i rem when you showed this to me in class. i didnt know what to say b/c mainly i didnt know what to say. after lookin at this for a while though, its overall a great piece. then agian you really dont need nother person sayin how talented of a writer you are so ill keep it simple, wordplay was good, closel spelled words never fail-lol, the structure was there, and it had a nice imagination-paint the picture in your mind- kinda feel. like i said overall another great piece.