yeah it was obvious she aint in2 flowin but since she admits it then i wont knock that part of the verse... def needs work BUT for a nonmcee it has a lil potential in it... the lyrics seemed like they were put down in a rush n unexpectedly but i guesss she gets an A for the overall effort.. not 2 mention... if shes a brand newbie in ths perfesion then hey... u gotta start somewhere.. practice makes perfect or at least the pure opposite as far most rappers in the game nowa days.1

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IJL.i thought id acknowledge it/now compotitions "losin faith" like Christopher Wallace did//
Step n ur dyin,getN no credit 4tryin/Only time u was in a bitch was ya class trip 2 ellis island/ Please believe? i speak da truth/i see U like retarded kids in empty rooms playin peek-A-boo //
in a battle?id disembowel any withN a circumfrance,kid 45th is da toughest/so like an armless janitor ud"kick da bucket"//