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Old 11-19-03, 02:45 PM   #4
M_80
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yo this was a nice poetic piece and u came correct for da ladies...real tight on speaking about love espiecially this line

"Relationships Have Flaws, You Tie The Knots In It.."

nice line i think im gonna use dat when i propose to my lady some day....

another ill line dat seem complex yet simple was

"N’ If Diversity Is A Challenge, Challenge Diversity"

but overall this was a real poetic piece nice work don...

da illest line in this piece in my opinion:

"Love Is One Fourth Of A Complete Life..
Meet Sights, n’ Greet Likes if Love Is Reached Right.."
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