the flow was nice. but the content was ehhhhhh for a text piece .. probably would suit audio more if you made it into one, lack of multi's / internals took from the piece in my opinion .. some of the rhyming words seemed forced as fuck towards the end and i dint really feel the topic .. seemed kinda `bragging rights` type piece made my attention wonder well before the second verse ..


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