Thread: love is dead
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Old 11-22-03, 10:32 PM   #9
Bloomquist
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A nice read i really enjoyed this line:

tears from your eyes only exaggerate the lies that you told in disguise
the more truth you recite, the more love dies, itll be wise to say our goodbyes

To me it was the line with the most emotion and the line i can relate to most. I liked this alot. Nice One.

Overall Grade:

8/10
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