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Old 11-24-03, 01:42 AM   #4
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This was ok i guess....you need to work on your structure though, try making your lines around the same length so it flows better....you had some good multies in there....your vocab was ok, it needs up'd though...just work on your structure mostly...overall this was ok...keep at it and keep dropping.
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