replied to> jay r, word perfect, and loco


sup... let me introduce myslef. My names Worth, ive been doing this shit awhile now, peep it...


Territory... what proclaims this are my anthologies toward my art... balance and flow before the production that persists, I resist opposition with variable twists, inducting hits through my lips to the web for these kids/
Im a linguistic lyricist, and thats what it is/
No room for verbal error, so tight when i freestyle your gasping for air, starring aimlessly at nothing when your choked by my style, verses bring you back to life to see worth go the mile/
Project disrespect and get set for my infectious flow, so sick im quarrantined like the url/
Rap/
Its life to me, unity with my brothers spitting rips for free/
You'll tap instantly defending me just like the industry, glamming words for self gain when it aint worth shit to me/
And as for battles/
If in doubt try an figure me out, I stop disasters before they happen when my verses spill out...


too drunk to finish, will do a bertter one later, peace

hmmm


this was not that good....structure was very off...work on that
u were goin pretty good with the multis at first but then
it just fell off....seemed like u just fell off the concept and
kept on going nowhere....honest opinion aight...just sayin...
keep spittin

suits the title to me

This was ok i guess....you need to work on your structure though, try making your lines around the same length so it flows better....you had some good multies in there....your vocab was ok, it needs up'd though...just work on your structure mostly...overall this was ok...keep at it and keep dropping.

Hey, can you post up your three replies bud?
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Thanks bud.