I think that one should not concentrate as much on complexity as one should ocus on getting their point across. I like the simplicity. I don't care for the content, I doubt that you really thuggin. I been in the streets and just from the scenarios you put out there I can tell they are recycled from your past movie and television experiences. Along with a lil bit of typical "mini mack" rap style it makes for a bad read to most, keep trying though, be more creative, and say something from the soul.