This gave me an edger allen poe feel. I was feelin this hommie, good symolies in here. I like how you described things.

"To feel your breath, tenderly swimming with in my very own…
And to feel your mortal existence next to my bare flesh, in our euphoric home!"
^extremely good lines right here, my favorite^
Good drop hommie...

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

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