Im sorta new to the ideas of evolution and such(Freshman!), but there are some ideas that I have seen before. Reading this a first time, was confusing as can be, I almost didn't find a message. After the elaborations that you made, I found alot of subtle metaphors and things I didn't notice which changed this piece into a refreshing scientific topic. It was a wonderful read, and it has so much more knowledge which I really want to find out, only time will give me that, but this piece is definately memorable.

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